28 Jun, 2021 02:46 PM

is this paragraph unified?

unified means all sentences should relate to a single idea Here it is: One of the best captains in the world was captain john smith. He loved to destroy other ships that were in his way. he one time raided 250 ships in one week. He took gold, food, drinks, and animals. He had an army of 500 people. the reason why he was the best pirate in the world was because he was the intimidater. thanks for the help.

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28 Jun, 2021 02:46 PM

Yes, it is unified.

You need to start every sentence with a capital letter. You need to capitalize "John Smith." It would be better if you explained why he was "the intimidater," because your paragraph does not mention him intimidating anyone, only stealing their stuff, which is not the same.